Susto (excerpt)

Tommy Archuleta

Never burn
unsent hate letters to the drought

unless you want for
your people

forty more
years under the god-given

blades that took
your great

grandfather’s
fields and never whatever you do

curse the fever that took
your beloved

mother
Doing so will only

wake then
maim the darkest thing

inside you
Believe you me

 

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Remedio: San Antonio de Padua

For lost objects and lost money, go without. For loss of vigor for life, begin the rite at once by setting down on paper the patient’s full name and date of birth. Second, obtain a small statue of the saint. Wrap all contents in cloth, secure with string, and toss the bundle into the river. Look for winged signs over the coming days when awake and when dreaming. They will appear if your-offering stays intact for nine full days.

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Tommy Archuleta is a native northern New Mexican. He works as a mental health therapist and substance abuse counselor for the New Mexico Corrections Department. Most recently his work has appeared in the New England Review, Laurel Review, Lily Poetry Review, The Cortland Review, Guesthouse, and the Poem-a-Day series sponsored by the Academy of American Poets. His full-length debut collection of poems entitled, Susto, is from The Center for Literary Publishing at Colorado State University as a Mountain/West Poetry Series title in collaboration with the National Endowment for the Arts. His debut chapbook is also due out Spring 2023 from Lily Poetry Review & Press. He lives and writes on the Cochiti Reservation.

Denver, Colorado

Susto is a whittled bone of a book, seething with marrow. In Archuleta’s realm, loss is not an abstraction, and grief is not simply a feeling. Instead, they inspirit every element of the external world (the wolf, the chokecherry tree, the window, the moth, the rose) and enfever the body, the mind, the dream, and the nightmare. The dead, here, are relentlessly unsentimental. They don’t just haunt. They live, unfettered by metaphor. The remedy/remedio comes through in ritual prose poems that serve as counterpoint to the sustos’ honed music. When it works, the specter becomes, once more, the beloved, though ‘[t]he fever it’s in us / for good . . . Just like the valley / Just like the moon.’ In Susto, Archuleta has delivered us back to the bottom-line sublime.”
—Diane Seuss

“I love this haunting and haunted book by Tommy Archuleta. It offers entry into a dreamscape made of memory and symbol, inflected by the chapparal and dry mountain landscape of Northern New Mexico and his family’s long history of settlement in the region. In Susto, the veils between oracular vision and hallucination, the living and the dead, are thin to nonexistent. Yet even through grief and confusion, there’s an earthy, bemused quality to Archuleta’s voice, as he navigates being a soul tethered to a body, a world ‘where love / keeps rhyming everything // with loss.’ The formal rhythm of this book is striking: prose instructions for healing rituals weave in and out of suites of sharp-edged couplets, where poems speak the elemental tongue: canyon, horse, moon, river—father, mother, ghost, fever. Susto is an arresting debut.”
—Dana Levin

“Tommy Archuleta’s debut, Susto, is alchemical, each poem a carbon print of something once there, now gone. Mother, dead. Father, dying. Trees, ‘downed by lightning.’ Moth, ‘wingless.’ Children, ‘gunned down.’ Rabbit, ‘flogged pillowcased.’ One loss transfigures into the next, creating a collection of ‘dark short songs / that are really one long dark song each.’ Archuleta writes, ‘Whatever you say here / dies twice the instant you say it,’ and so these poems become double elegies, first for the departed, then for the left-behind. Susto, Archuleta’s own ‘long dark song,’ is interrupted only by remedios, poems that break form and offer instructions for spiritual and practical care, remedies for the ‘magical fright’ of grief. You’ll need them: Archuleta’s haunted, incandescent poems move through you like fever.”
—Jane Huffman

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